This is something...very entertaining. Love everything about it, especially the suspense, leaving me wanting more of the story...come on, put more pages to it. I love it.
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Love it...it is well written; especially the concept of the story. I scored the 'Style' three stars because I'm not used to the format of writing. Well good luck in the competition, I... Read More
This is a very good script, very interesting to put one in the lives of the characters. I did not want to stop reading, and then, that's it. I guess that is expected. I did not find anything wrong to ... Read More
I love it. It's a great script, although there are very few mistakes. I like the Characters. I love the writing style. The concept, well love the suspense, I think that is what makes it a great script... Read More
I like it. It's very interesting especially when he accuses her of stealing. I believe the Characters are strong. The dialogue feels comical, but then the start feels serious, I might just get it wron... Read More