Sorry, but I think you need to read up on a few scripts to get the formatting right.
Something like this is important, very important, otherwise your script will just be discarded.
For instanc... Read More
Bold subject matter, which could easily have backfired, but you pretty much pull it off.
The pace of the script flowed effortlessly, really complimented the cycle nature of the subject. I feel y... Read More
First off, I really enjoyed the concept. You've really captured an intriguing dynamic of a friend group, connected through texts, and egotistical outlooks. I particularly liked the fact that the break... Read More
Only my thoughts as a viewer, do not want to patronise and influence you to make changes.
The Ugly Bird Catches the Worm first and foremost has a great atmosphere. The pub in particular evokes a sc... Read More