Very charming and fun little story. What i liked most about it is probably the way you've depicted the main characters and set up their dialog. It made me really laugh, which is crucial to a comedy.
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The story of a man trapped in isolation by choice faces his demons after he dies. A nice piece with an interesting twist at the end. The question here is not about who's really guilty. Both in a sense... Read More
What I particularly liked about Hit and Run is that you have two different characters, both from very different backgrounds, meet in a very tragic way.
The ending definitely leaves a lot of space f... Read More
First of all I like the fact that you have told the story from a dog's perspective. A few years back i'd written a treatment that had 4 abandoned dogs as the main characters, told through their perspe... Read More
I really enjoyed diving into John's 'slow' world as I very much share his love for old-timers.
What I particularly like about your scripts is that you've dealt with the contrast of old and new - p... Read More