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The last wish

by fshtravis

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A young man, the girlfriend´s wraith, a lovely meeting. Many things happen one night...

Type: short

Genre: Paranormal,Romance,Drama

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A young man is broken because of death of his girlfriend. One night he will have a lovely meeting with her. They have to tell each other many things, but not all are good..

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    • Tasya Pharo

    • 2012-06-26 22:37:51
    • This seems hurried. You have some words missing a letter. Also 'he puts down unexpectedly'. For that to happen, he shouldn't have said bye but just hang up the phone. Also lack of commas. It's best if you re-read it slowly and see what needs fixing.

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